Magazine front cover - Learner response
1) Add your finished magazine cover as a JPEG image. 2) Type up your feedback from your teacher. If you've received this by email, you can copy and paste it across - WWW and EBIs. You don't need to include a mark or grade if you don't want to. Mark out of 15 for Media Language: 9 Estimated A Level coursework grade: C WWW: This is a mainly good quality cover that doesn’t look massively out of place alongside real versions of Essence magazine. The conventions are all there (I like the cover lines you have written) and the image is very close to being excellent. Your evaluation is short (too short!) but you do pick out the key weakness which is the green background remaining. EBI: There are two factors that are keeping you out of the top level here. Firstly, the central image. It’s so close to a great picture – but the green in the hair is an issue that would definitely require a re-shoot if it was your real coursework. Secondly, I’m not sure on the font and typography