January Assessment Learner Response
1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential) www: You start so well: the question 1 unseen analysis is superb and you pick out key details so well. Now you need to match this across the paper. Ebi: PSB is a weakness: revise this area For question 4, you offer some interesting examples and look at both sides of the question but don't seem to know the theories well enough to offer a detailed critical analysis. Lots of potential here though. 2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Identify at least one potential point that you missed out on for each question in the assessment. Question 1- low key lighting indicates masculinity and vulnerability. Question 2- Diversification- companies can embrace new technology and find new revenue streams. 3) On a scale of 1-10 (1 = low, 10 = high), how much revision and preparation did you do for this assessment? You may also want to think here whether yo